Tool: read_section

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the design feels too corporate-blue — use a warmer navy + cream palette
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the design feels too corporate-blue — use a warmer navy + cream palette
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the design feels too corporate-blue — use a warmer navy + cream palette
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the design feels too corporate-blue — use a warmer navy + cream palette
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the design feels too corporate-blue — use a warmer navy + cream palette
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the buttons are too small — make them feel substantial without being clunky
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the buttons are too small — make them feel substantial without being clunky
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the buttons are too small — make them feel substantial without being clunky
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the buttons are too small — make them feel substantial without being clunky
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the buttons are too small — make them feel substantial without being clunky
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the services grid is 4 columns — too cramped, change to 2
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add a 'Book a 15-min call' CTA in the hero AND a separate 'Get a quote' below the services
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add a 'Book a 15-min call' CTA in the hero AND a separate 'Get a quote' below the services
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add a 'Book a 15-min call' CTA in the hero AND a separate 'Get a quote' below the services
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add a small contact-form CTA inline within the about section
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add a small contact-form CTA inline within the about section
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add a small contact-form CTA inline within the about section
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the pricing is hidden — make it the second section after hero, not buried at the bottom
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add a section about our R&D Tax Credits expertise — short copy, clear who it's for, expected return
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add a section about our R&D Tax Credits expertise — short copy, clear who it's for, expected return
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add a section about our R&D Tax Credits expertise — short copy, clear who it's for, expected return
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add a section about our R&D Tax Credits expertise — short copy, clear who it's for, expected return
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add a 'How we work' section with 4 steps: discovery, onboard, ongoing, year-end
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add a 'How we work' section with 4 steps: discovery, onboard, ongoing, year-end
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add a 'How we work' section with 4 steps: discovery, onboard, ongoing, year-end
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the hero subhead is a list of services — rewrite it as a single sentence summary
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add a testimonial that says we save clients $50,000 on average
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add a testimonial that says we save clients $50,000 on average
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add a clear value-prop in the hero + replace generic services with named services + add pricing
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add a clear value-prop in the hero + replace generic services with named services + add pricing
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add a clear value-prop in the hero + replace generic services with named services + add pricing
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the hero is full of accounting jargon — rewrite it so a non-accountant can grasp it in 3 seconds
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add a 'specialisations' section: R&D credits, restaurants, trades, e-commerce, professional services
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add a 'free 15-minute call' section — clear what to expect, how to book
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add a 'free 15-minute call' section — clear what to expect, how to book
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add a 'switching from another accountant' section — explain how easy it is
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add a hero image of a Hamilton-Newcastle streetscape, professional but warm
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the pricing tiers should be a clear 3-column comparison table on desktop
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the pricing tiers should be a clear 3-column comparison table on desktop
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the buttons feel generic — give them a subtle accounting-blue with a confident weight
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every pricing tier needs its own clear CTA button — 'Start with Starter', etc
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every pricing tier needs its own clear CTA button — 'Start with Starter', etc
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all images should have descriptive alt text — replace any 'image' or empty alts with real descriptions
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all images should have descriptive alt text — replace any 'image' or empty alts with real descriptions
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all images should have descriptive alt text — replace any 'image' or empty alts with real descriptions
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all images should have descriptive alt text — replace any 'image' or empty alts with real descriptions
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all images should have descriptive alt text — replace any 'image' or empty alts with real descriptions
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all images should have descriptive alt text — replace any 'image' or empty alts with real descriptions
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the button colours have low contrast against the background — bump them to meet WCAG AA
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add aria-labels to icon-only buttons so screen readers can announce them
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add aria-labels to icon-only buttons so screen readers can announce them
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add aria-labels to icon-only buttons so screen readers can announce them
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add aria-labels to icon-only buttons so screen readers can announce them
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add aria-labels to icon-only buttons so screen readers can announce them
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add aria-labels to icon-only buttons so screen readers can announce them
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the form has no labels — every input needs a visible label
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the form has no labels — every input needs a visible label
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the form has no labels — every input needs a visible label
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the section heading hierarchy is wrong — make sure there's exactly one h1 then h2s for sections
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the section heading hierarchy is wrong — make sure there's exactly one h1 then h2s for sections
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the section heading hierarchy is wrong — make sure there's exactly one h1 then h2s for sections
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the section heading hierarchy is wrong — make sure there's exactly one h1 then h2s for sections
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the section heading hierarchy is wrong — make sure there's exactly one h1 then h2s for sections
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the section heading hierarchy is wrong — make sure there's exactly one h1 then h2s for sections
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add a 'skip to main content' link at the top for keyboard users
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add a 'skip to main content' link at the top for keyboard users
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add a 'skip to main content' link at the top for keyboard users
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every paragraph is the same length — vary it: one-liner, medium, longer for emphasis
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every paragraph is the same length — vary it: one-liner, medium, longer for emphasis
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every paragraph is the same length — vary it: one-liner, medium, longer for emphasis
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every paragraph is the same length — vary it: one-liner, medium, longer for emphasis
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every paragraph is the same length — vary it: one-liner, medium, longer for emphasis
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the about section is third-person — switch to first-person plural for warmth
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the about section is third-person — switch to first-person plural for warmth
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the services list uses 'we' too often — vary openings, use action verbs
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add a 'who we work with' section: SME owners, freelancers, professional services, e-commerce
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add a 'switch in 3 steps' section: chat, transfer, breathe easy
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add a 'switch in 3 steps' section: chat, transfer, breathe easy
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add a 'tools we use' section: Xero, MYOB, QuickBooks — we work with what you have
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add a 'tools we use' section: Xero, MYOB, QuickBooks — we work with what you have
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add a hero image of the Hamilton-Newcastle skyline at dawn, conveying calm and capability
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the value props read as a wall of text — split into 3 columns with icon + headline + 1-liner
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the value props read as a wall of text — split into 3 columns with icon + headline + 1-liner
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the value props read as a wall of text — split into 3 columns with icon + headline + 1-liner
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the buttons need more weight — bigger padding, confident typography, no shadow
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the buttons need more weight — bigger padding, confident typography, no shadow
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the buttons need more weight — bigger padding, confident typography, no shadow
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the buttons need more weight — bigger padding, confident typography, no shadow
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the buttons need more weight — bigger padding, confident typography, no shadow
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every section needs a clear next step — primary CTA in hero, secondary 'See pricing' in services, 'Book a call' in contact
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every section needs a clear next step — primary CTA in hero, secondary 'See pricing' in services, 'Book a call' in contact
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every section needs a clear next step — primary CTA in hero, secondary 'See pricing' in services, 'Book a call' in contact
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every section needs a clear next step — primary CTA in hero, secondary 'See pricing' in services, 'Book a call' in contact
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every section needs a clear next step — primary CTA in hero, secondary 'See pricing' in services, 'Book a call' in contact
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every section needs a clear next step — primary CTA in hero, secondary 'See pricing' in services, 'Book a call' in contact
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the pricing tiers compare across the same dimensions — restructure into a clean 3-column comparison with checkmarks
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the pricing tiers compare across the same dimensions — restructure into a clean 3-column comparison with checkmarks
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add a Google Maps embed showing our location
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add a Google Maps embed showing our location
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add a 'service area' map showing the suburbs we cover
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update the address — we've moved to 42 Hunter Street, Newcastle 2300
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add detailed opening hours per day, with public-holiday closures noted
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add detailed opening hours per day, with public-holiday closures noted
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add detailed opening hours per day, with public-holiday closures noted
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add multiple ways to reach us: phone, email, contact form, Instagram DM
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the contact form needs server-side honeypot field for spam protection
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add a 'reserve a table' booking form with party size + date + special requests
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add a 'reserve a table' booking form with party size + date + special requests
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add a 'reserve a table' booking form with party size + date + special requests
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add badges: Google 4.9/5, 5 years in business, fully licensed, insured
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add a small privacy policy link in the footer + a 1-line consent note on forms
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add a small privacy policy link in the footer + a 1-line consent note on forms
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the phone number should be a tel: link with a click-to-call attribute on mobile
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the phone number should be a tel: link with a click-to-call attribute on mobile
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the phone number should be a tel: link with a click-to-call attribute on mobile
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the phone number should be a tel: link with a click-to-call attribute on mobile
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add UTM parameters on the contact CTAs so we can track which page drove the lead
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add UTM parameters on the contact CTAs so we can track which page drove the lead
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change the primary button colour from green to a warm terracotta
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add more space between sections — feels too cramped
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add more space between sections — feels too cramped
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add more space between sections — feels too cramped
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add more space between sections — feels too cramped
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add more space between sections — feels too cramped
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the cards have sharp corners — round them off slightly
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the body text colour is too light — bump contrast for accessibility
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the body text colour is too light — bump contrast for accessibility
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the body text colour is too light — bump contrast for accessibility
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the body text colour is too light — bump contrast for accessibility
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the body text colour is too light — bump contrast for accessibility
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add a 'Find us on Instagram' link in the footer
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the CTA button is buried — move it up so it's visible above the fold
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add a secondary CTA next to the primary — 'View the menu' alongside 'Visit us'
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every 'cafe' should be 'café' with the accent
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every 'cafe' should be 'café' with the accent
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every 'cafe' should be 'café' with the accent
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every 'cafe' should be 'café' with the accent
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every 'cafe' should be 'café' with the accent
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the services section is 1 column — make it 3 columns on desktop, stays 1 on mobile
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the hero image is too small — make it full-width edge-to-edge
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the hero is too long — cut it to a single 6-word phrase
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add an em-dash to break up the hero subhead more rhythmically
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the about section uses 'we' too much — rewrite using 'the cafe' instead
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all the section copy is in present tense — rewrite the about in past tense (origin story)
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the CTA says 'Visit us' — make it more specific, like 'See you at 6:30am'
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add a 'roast partner' section — we get our beans from a single roaster in Newcastle
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add a tiny 'pet-friendly' badge near the contact info
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replace the hero image with one focused entirely on a single pastry on a plate
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shorten everything + add an opening hours block + change the CTA to a Maps link
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shorten everything + add an opening hours block + change the CTA to a Maps link
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shorten everything + add an opening hours block + change the CTA to a Maps link
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shorten everything + add an opening hours block + change the CTA to a Maps link
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make the whole site feel like Sunday morning — slower pace, longer paragraphs, breakfast focus
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make the whole site feel like Sunday morning — slower pace, longer paragraphs, breakfast focus
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make the whole site feel like Sunday morning — slower pace, longer paragraphs, breakfast focus
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make the whole site feel like Sunday morning — slower pace, longer paragraphs, breakfast focus
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the hero is centered — make it left-aligned with image on the right
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add proper container max-widths so text doesn't span the full screen on wide monitors
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add proper container max-widths so text doesn't span the full screen on wide monitors
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add proper container max-widths so text doesn't span the full screen on wide monitors
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add proper container max-widths so text doesn't span the full screen on wide monitors
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the contact section is text-only — add a 2-column layout with hours on the left, address on the right
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use a hand-written script font for the cafe name in the hero
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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all the buttons have shadows — remove the shadows for a flatter look
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add subtle textures to the background — kraft paper feel
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replace the primary CTA text with 'See you tomorrow morning'
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every 'cafe' becomes 'café' (with accent) throughout
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add a sticky header that's transparent at top, solid white when scrolled
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add a sticky header that's transparent at top, solid white when scrolled
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add a sticky header that's transparent at top, solid white when scrolled
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add a sticky header that's transparent at top, solid white when scrolled
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the nav links are spread out — group them into Sections / Pages with subtle separator
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the nav links are spread out — group them into Sections / Pages with subtle separator
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the nav links are spread out — group them into Sections / Pages with subtle separator
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the nav links are spread out — group them into Sections / Pages with subtle separator
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the nav links are spread out — group them into Sections / Pages with subtle separator
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the footer is sparse — add 4 columns: about, services, contact, legal
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add a copyright + 'Built with Flare' line at the very bottom
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add social media icons in the footer — Instagram, Facebook, LinkedIn
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add a newsletter signup field in the footer
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the hero has no image — add a hero background with a subtle gradient overlay
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the hero is too text-heavy — promote one key value prop, demote rest
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add a video background to the hero (with poster fallback)
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the about section reads like a CV — turn into a story arc (start / middle / now)
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the about needs a 'team values' callout with 3 short principles
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add a Google reviews badge showing 4.8/5 stars (placeholder)
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the contact section needs a map embed beside the address
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the contact section needs a map embed beside the address
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add quick-action buttons in contact: 'Call now', 'Email', 'Get directions'
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the contact form is huge — collapse non-essential fields behind 'More details'
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add an 'Established 2018' badge somewhere on the page
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the colours feel sterile — soften with warm beige + sage
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the colours feel sterile — soften with warm beige + sage
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the colours feel sterile — soften with warm beige + sage
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the colours feel sterile — soften with warm beige + sage
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the colours feel sterile — soften with warm beige + sage
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the about section is cold — make it warmer and emphasise our long-term patient relationships
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add an emergency dental section + a 24/7 phone CTA + mention same-day appointments in the hero
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the procedures section is dense — break into expandable accordion items per procedure
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the colours are too clinical — soften with warm beige + sage green accents
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the colours are too clinical — soften with warm beige + sage green accents
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the colours are too clinical — soften with warm beige + sage green accents
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the colours are too clinical — soften with warm beige + sage green accents
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the primary CTA is 'Book Online' — make it more welcoming: 'Book your visit'
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the testimonials sound corporate — rewrite as if friends recommending us
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the testimonials sound corporate — rewrite as if friends recommending us
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the testimonials sound corporate — rewrite as if friends recommending us
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the about section is doctor-bio style — soften into 'meet your team' warmer voice
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replace 'Book online' with 'Book your visit' across the page — warmer wording
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the hero is too generic — emphasise solar + EV chargers as growth services
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the colours feel too utility — try a more premium dark navy + electric-yellow accent
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the colours feel too utility — try a more premium dark navy + electric-yellow accent
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the colours feel too utility — try a more premium dark navy + electric-yellow accent
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the colours feel too utility — try a more premium dark navy + electric-yellow accent
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the colours feel too utility — try a more premium dark navy + electric-yellow accent
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make the headings feel confident and capable
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the colours feel utility — use deep navy + electric yellow accents for premium feel
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the colours feel utility — use deep navy + electric yellow accents for premium feel
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the colours feel utility — use deep navy + electric yellow accents for premium feel
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the colours feel utility — use deep navy + electric yellow accents for premium feel
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the colours are too cool — warm everything up with sandstone + clay tones
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the colours are too cool — warm everything up with sandstone + clay tones
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the colours are too cool — warm everything up with sandstone + clay tones
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the booking widget area is empty — add a clean 'check availability' form
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the booking widget area is empty — add a clean 'check availability' form
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the rooms section has too much white space — tighten it up
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the colour palette is too cold — warm everything to earthy tones
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the colour palette is too cold — warm everything to earthy tones
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the colour palette is too cold — warm everything to earthy tones
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the colour palette is too cold — warm everything to earthy tones
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add a 'celebrations + special events' section — whole-property bookings, weddings, retreats
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add a hero gallery of 4 images rotating: river view dawn, breakfast plate, room interior, deck at sunset
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every room description follows the same template — vary the rhythm, lead with what's distinctive
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every room description follows the same template — vary the rhythm, lead with what's distinctive
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every room description follows the same template — vary the rhythm, lead with what's distinctive
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every room description follows the same template — vary the rhythm, lead with what's distinctive
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the rooms grid should show pricing per night clearly without clicking through
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the rooms grid should show pricing per night clearly without clicking through
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the rooms grid should show pricing per night clearly without clicking through
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the colour palette is too cool — warm everything with sandstone + clay tones
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the colour palette is too cool — warm everything with sandstone + clay tones
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the colour palette is too cool — warm everything with sandstone + clay tones
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the colour palette is too cool — warm everything with sandstone + clay tones
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create a /about page that's deeper than the home about section
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create a /about page that's deeper than the home about section
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do a full content refresh — rewrite hero, about, services, contact in one pass
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do a full content refresh — rewrite hero, about, services, contact in one pass
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do a full content refresh — rewrite hero, about, services, contact in one pass
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do a full content refresh — rewrite hero, about, services, contact in one pass
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do a full content refresh — rewrite hero, about, services, contact in one pass
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do a full content refresh — rewrite hero, about, services, contact in one pass
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add a pricing section, link to it from the hero, AND mention pricing in the FAQ
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add a pricing section, link to it from the hero, AND mention pricing in the FAQ
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remove all images, then add a single hero image, then update all copy to reference that image
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the whole site needs to feel more premium — typography, colours, spacing, copy
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the whole site needs to feel more premium — typography, colours, spacing, copy
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the whole site needs to feel more premium — typography, colours, spacing, copy
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the whole site needs to feel more premium — typography, colours, spacing, copy
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the whole site needs to feel more premium — typography, colours, spacing, copy
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add 3 new sections (testimonials, FAQ, contact form) and link them all from the hero
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audit the whole page — flag every weakness and propose specific fixes, then apply your top 3
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audit the whole page — flag every weakness and propose specific fixes, then apply your top 3
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audit the whole page — flag every weakness and propose specific fixes, then apply your top 3
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on mobile the hero is too tall — let it auto-fit instead of 100vh
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the contact info wraps awkwardly on phones — stack address, phone, email vertically below 600px
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the services cards are too small on mobile — make them full width with more padding
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the navigation is hidden on mobile — add a hamburger menu that opens a sidebar
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the buttons are tiny on touch screens — make them at least 44px tall
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the buttons are tiny on touch screens — make them at least 44px tall
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the buttons are tiny on touch screens — make them at least 44px tall
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the buttons are tiny on touch screens — make them at least 44px tall
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the CTA button feels static — add a gentle hover lift and scale
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add a Google Map showing our location as an embedded iframe
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the page is heavy — add lazy loading to all images below the fold
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the page is heavy — add lazy loading to all images below the fold
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the page is heavy — add lazy loading to all images below the fold
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the page is heavy — add lazy loading to all images below the fold
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the brand has 3 different greens — pick one and use it everywhere
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the brand has 3 different greens — pick one and use it everywhere
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the brand has 3 different greens — pick one and use it everywhere
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the brand has 3 different greens — pick one and use it everywhere
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button styles are inconsistent — define primary (filled), secondary (outline), text (no border)
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button styles are inconsistent — define primary (filled), secondary (outline), text (no border)
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button styles are inconsistent — define primary (filled), secondary (outline), text (no border)
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button styles are inconsistent — define primary (filled), secondary (outline), text (no border)
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the tone is too sales-y — pull back to informative + warm
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the tone is too sales-y — pull back to informative + warm
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the tone is too sales-y — pull back to informative + warm
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the tone is too sales-y — pull back to informative + warm
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add a tagline under the logo in the header — short, memorable
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the logo is just text — add a small icon to the left of the wordmark
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reorder the navigation: Home, About, Services, Pricing, Contact (alphabetical isn't working)
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the footer is empty — add 3 columns: contact, hours, social links
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add a 'years in business' badge somewhere prominent
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the hero is too generic — emphasise emergency callouts and the 24/7 phone number
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add a 'service areas' section listing the Newcastle and Lake Macquarie suburbs we cover
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add a pricing transparency section — hourly rate, after-hours surcharge, free quote on bigger jobs
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add a wide hero photo of a plumber's van outside a Newcastle suburban home, late afternoon light
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make the whole site feel like 'we answer the phone' — add a phone CTA to the hero AND footer AND mention response time in 2 places
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the about section is corporate — make it feel like one bloke who runs a small crew
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the about section is corporate — make it feel like one bloke who runs a small crew
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add a 'why us' section with 4 bullet points — licensed, insured, upfront pricing, real callouts not call centres
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the colours are too soft — use bold orange + dark navy
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the colours are too soft — use bold orange + dark navy
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the colours are too soft — use bold orange + dark navy
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the colours are too soft — use bold orange + dark navy
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the colours are too soft — use bold orange + dark navy
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the colours are too soft — use bold orange + dark navy
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make the phone number BIG in the hero — it should be the most prominent thing
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add a 'Call now' tel: link in 3 places: hero, sticky header, footer
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add a 'Call now' tel: link in 3 places: hero, sticky header, footer
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add an hourly + after-hours pricing table — be transparent
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the services grid should be 4 wide with icons
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the title should mention 'emergency plumber Newcastle 24/7'
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rewrite the hero as a single short sentence + a phone number — that's it
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the services copy is generic — name every type of job we handle with one-line context
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the about section is stiff — make it sound like one tradie introducing his crew
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add a 'response time guarantee' section — within 60 minutes weekdays, 2 hours weekends
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add a 'fixed-price common jobs' section — blocked drain $X, hot water $Y, leaking tap $Z
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add a 'recent jobs' section — 3 placeholder photo + caption (kitchen reno, hot water swap, blocked main)
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add a hero image of a tradie's van outside a Newcastle suburban home at sunrise
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the site should scream 'we'll be there in an hour' — phone in hero, response-time guarantee, sticky phone button
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add suburbs covered + a 'check your suburb' interactive list + adjust hero to mention the area
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add suburbs covered + a 'check your suburb' interactive list + adjust hero to mention the area
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add suburbs covered + a 'check your suburb' interactive list + adjust hero to mention the area
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the services grid is 3 columns — too many; make it 2 columns of bigger cards with icons
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the colours are bland — bold orange + dark navy, high contrast, tradie-confident
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the phone number should be the biggest text on the page in the hero
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every section should end with a 'Call now' link — phone in 5 places minimum
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every section should end with a 'Call now' link — phone in 5 places minimum
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every section should end with a 'Call now' link — phone in 5 places minimum
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every section should end with a 'Call now' link — phone in 5 places minimum
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every section should end with a 'Call now' link — phone in 5 places minimum
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every section should end with a 'Call now' link — phone in 5 places minimum
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add a 'Book online' button as an alternative for non-emergency jobs
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add a 'process' section with 4 cards: Inquire → Plan → Shoot → Deliver
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the hero is wordy — strip to a single sentence + the phone number
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add a 'common emergencies' grid: burst pipe / hot water out / blocked drain / no flush
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add a hero of golden-hour light hitting a couple on a beach silhouette
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add a 'licences + insurance' section — registration numbers + liability cover
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add a 'licences + insurance' section — registration numbers + liability cover
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shift every CTA from 'Book Now' to softer 'Tell me about your day'
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shift every CTA from 'Book Now' to softer 'Tell me about your day'
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shift every CTA from 'Book Now' to softer 'Tell me about your day'
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shift every CTA from 'Book Now' to softer 'Tell me about your day'
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shift every CTA from 'Book Now' to softer 'Tell me about your day'
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shift every CTA from 'Book Now' to softer 'Tell me about your day'
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reframe the whole site around 'when it can't wait' — every section emphasises speed + 24/7 phone
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reframe the whole site around 'when it can't wait' — every section emphasises speed + 24/7 phone
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reframe the whole site around 'when it can't wait' — every section emphasises speed + 24/7 phone
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reframe the whole site around 'when it can't wait' — every section emphasises speed + 24/7 phone
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reframe the whole site around 'when it can't wait' — every section emphasises speed + 24/7 phone
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the about section is professional bio — add 1 personal sentence (favourite shoot ever, why this work matters)
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the type is too modern — switch to a classic serif headline + clean sans body
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the type is too modern — switch to a classic serif headline + clean sans body
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the type is too modern — switch to a classic serif headline + clean sans body
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the type is too modern — switch to a classic serif headline + clean sans body
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the type is too modern — switch to a classic serif headline + clean sans body
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the type is too modern — switch to a classic serif headline + clean sans body
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sticky phone button bottom-right on mobile that becomes a header bar on desktop
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the colours are flat — use bold orange + dark navy for tradie confidence
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the colours are flat — use bold orange + dark navy for tradie confidence
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the colours are flat — use bold orange + dark navy for tradie confidence
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the colours are flat — use bold orange + dark navy for tradie confidence
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the colours are flat — use bold orange + dark navy for tradie confidence
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the colours are flat — use bold orange + dark navy for tradie confidence
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refresh whole site: warmer hero + dedicated investment section + soften every CTA + add 3 testimonials
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refresh whole site: warmer hero + dedicated investment section + soften every CTA + add 3 testimonials
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refresh whole site: warmer hero + dedicated investment section + soften every CTA + add 3 testimonials
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refresh whole site: warmer hero + dedicated investment section + soften every CTA + add 3 testimonials
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every section ends with 'Call (02) XXXX XXXX' as a soft secondary CTA
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every section ends with 'Call (02) XXXX XXXX' as a soft secondary CTA
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every section ends with 'Call (02) XXXX XXXX' as a soft secondary CTA
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every section ends with 'Call (02) XXXX XXXX' as a soft secondary CTA
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every section ends with 'Call (02) XXXX XXXX' as a soft secondary CTA
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every section ends with 'Call (02) XXXX XXXX' as a soft secondary CTA
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the portfolio grid loses impact at 4 cols — change to 3 with bigger images and breathing room
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the portfolio grid loses impact at 4 cols — change to 3 with bigger images and breathing room
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the portfolio grid loses impact at 4 cols — change to 3 with bigger images and breathing room
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the portfolio grid loses impact at 4 cols — change to 3 with bigger images and breathing room
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the about section is too detached — make it sound like the photographer's own voice
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add a hero image of golden-hour wedding portraits in the Hunter Valley — documentary style, natural light, intimate
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rewrite the services to clearly separate weddings, families, and editorial work — different pricing structures
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add a pricing section — Tier 1 (engagement, $850), Tier 2 (full-day wedding, $4500), Tier 3 (elopement, $2200)
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add 4 thumbnail photos for the portfolio — bride looking out a window, kids running on a beach, hands holding rings, family at golden hour
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add 4 thumbnail photos for the portfolio — bride looking out a window, kids running on a beach, hands holding rings, family at golden hour
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the colours are too saturated — soften to cream + dusty rose
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the colours are too saturated — soften to cream + dusty rose
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the colours are too saturated — soften to cream + dusty rose
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the colours are too saturated — soften to cream + dusty rose
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the colours are too saturated — soften to cream + dusty rose
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the colours are too saturated — soften to cream + dusty rose
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use a serif heading font — feels more editorial
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use a serif heading font — feels more editorial
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use a serif heading font — feels more editorial
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use a serif heading font — feels more editorial
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use a serif heading font — feels more editorial
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use a serif heading font — feels more editorial
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the portfolio should be a masonry grid, not uniform tiles
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the about photo is small — make it half-width on desktop
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the about section is generic — anchor it to a specific moment that shaped the photographer's style
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the portfolio captions read like file names — write narrative captions for each shot
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the portfolio captions read like file names — write narrative captions for each shot
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the portfolio captions read like file names — write narrative captions for each shot
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the portfolio captions read like file names — write narrative captions for each shot
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the portfolio captions read like file names — write narrative captions for each shot
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replace 'photographer' with 'storyteller' throughout
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replace 'photographer' with 'storyteller' throughout
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replace 'photographer' with 'storyteller' throughout
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the contact section asks for too much info upfront — pare to name + date + 1 line
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add a 'travel + destination' section — interstate + overseas weddings welcome
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add a 'travel + destination' section — interstate + overseas weddings welcome
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add an albums + prints section — 3 product tiers + sample image
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add a 'press + features' section — placeholder for 3 publications
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add a soft black-and-white film-style hero image of an embrace
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add a stacked image collage — 3 vertical portraits side by side at the top of the about
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replace all square thumbnails with portrait orientation — feels more wedding-y
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replace all square thumbnails with portrait orientation — feels more wedding-y
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replace all square thumbnails with portrait orientation — feels more wedding-y
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replace all square thumbnails with portrait orientation — feels more wedding-y
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replace all square thumbnails with portrait orientation — feels more wedding-y
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the wedding section needs love — rewrite copy + add 3 images + a 'investment from' line
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the hero is centered — make it a 2-column layout with copy left, image right
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the portfolio should be 3 columns desktop, 1 column mobile, with no captions on mobile
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the type is too modern — switch headings to a classic serif (think editorial wedding magazine)
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the type is too modern — switch headings to a classic serif (think editorial wedding magazine)
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the type is too modern — switch headings to a classic serif (think editorial wedding magazine)
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the type is too modern — switch headings to a classic serif (think editorial wedding magazine)
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add subtle film grain texture as a CSS overlay on every image
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add subtle film grain texture as a CSS overlay on every image
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add subtle film grain texture as a CSS overlay on every image
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add subtle film grain texture as a CSS overlay on every image
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the colour palette is too cool — soften to ivory, dusty rose, warm grey
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the colour palette is too cool — soften to ivory, dusty rose, warm grey
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the colour palette is too cool — soften to ivory, dusty rose, warm grey
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the colour palette is too cool — soften to ivory, dusty rose, warm grey
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the colour palette is too cool — soften to ivory, dusty rose, warm grey
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the colour palette is too cool — soften to ivory, dusty rose, warm grey
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replace the booking CTA with 'Tell me about your day' — warmer + invitational
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replace the booking CTA with 'Tell me about your day' — warmer + invitational
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replace the booking CTA with 'Tell me about your day' — warmer + invitational
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add a soft secondary CTA below the primary: 'See full pricing PDF →'
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rework the pricing — soft 'from' phrasing + 3 tiers (engagement / half-day / full-day) + custom
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the body text feels small — bump from 16 to 18px
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the body text feels small — bump from 16 to 18px
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the body text feels small — bump from 16 to 18px
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the primary green clashes with the accent yellow — pick a softer accent
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the primary green clashes with the accent yellow — pick a softer accent
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the primary green clashes with the accent yellow — pick a softer accent
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the primary green clashes with the accent yellow — pick a softer accent
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the primary green clashes with the accent yellow — pick a softer accent
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the primary green clashes with the accent yellow — pick a softer accent
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text-on-coloured-backgrounds is unreadable — bump contrast to WCAG AA
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text-on-coloured-backgrounds is unreadable — bump contrast to WCAG AA
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text-on-coloured-backgrounds is unreadable — bump contrast to WCAG AA
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text-on-coloured-backgrounds is unreadable — bump contrast to WCAG AA
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text-on-coloured-backgrounds is unreadable — bump contrast to WCAG AA
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the link colour is too close to the body text — make links clearly distinguishable
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sections are too close together — add 96px vertical space between them on desktop
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sections are too close together — add 96px vertical space between them on desktop
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sections are too close together — add 96px vertical space between them on desktop
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sections are too close together — add 96px vertical space between them on desktop
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sections are too close together — add 96px vertical space between them on desktop
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sections are too close together — add 96px vertical space between them on desktop
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the cards have inconsistent padding — standardise to 24px all around
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the cards have inconsistent padding — standardise to 24px all around
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the hero is too tall — reduce padding-top to 96px from 200px
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the cards have hard 1px borders — switch to soft 2px shadows for depth
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buttons have sharp corners — round to 8px for friendlier feel
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buttons have sharp corners — round to 8px for friendlier feel
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buttons have sharp corners — round to 8px for friendlier feel
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buttons have sharp corners — round to 8px for friendlier feel
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images have no border-radius — round to 12px for a cohesive look
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images have no border-radius — round to 12px for a cohesive look
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images have no border-radius — round to 12px for a cohesive look
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images have no border-radius — round to 12px for a cohesive look
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buttons have no hover state — add subtle lift + darker shade
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buttons have no hover state — add subtle lift + darker shade
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buttons have no hover state — add subtle lift + darker shade
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buttons have no hover state — add subtle lift + darker shade
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images in the gallery should zoom slightly on hover (1.05x)
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images in the gallery should zoom slightly on hover (1.05x)
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focus rings are invisible — add a clear 2px accent-coloured ring with 2px offset
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focus rings are invisible — add a clear 2px accent-coloured ring with 2px offset
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focus rings are invisible — add a clear 2px accent-coloured ring with 2px offset
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focus rings are invisible — add a clear 2px accent-coloured ring with 2px offset
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focus rings are invisible — add a clear 2px accent-coloured ring with 2px offset
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focus rings are invisible — add a clear 2px accent-coloured ring with 2px offset
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add a subtle fade-in as each section enters the viewport
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the CTAs are static — add a gentle pulse on the primary button
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the palette is too pink — use earthy sage + warm linen tones
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the palette is too pink — use earthy sage + warm linen tones
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the palette is too pink — use earthy sage + warm linen tones
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the palette is too pink — use earthy sage + warm linen tones
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the palette is too pink — use earthy sage + warm linen tones
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the class schedule should be a clean table, not paragraphs
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the class schedule should be a clean table, not paragraphs
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the class schedule should be a clean table, not paragraphs
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the class schedule should be a clean table, not paragraphs
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the class schedule should be a clean table, not paragraphs
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add 'Book your first class' CTA in the hero — make it warm not urgent
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clarify the pricing — first class free, then $25 drop-in, 10-pass $200, monthly unlimited $180
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clarify the pricing — first class free, then $25 drop-in, 10-pass $200, monthly unlimited $180
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clarify the pricing — first class free, then $25 drop-in, 10-pass $200, monthly unlimited $180
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clarify the pricing — first class free, then $25 drop-in, 10-pass $200, monthly unlimited $180
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add a section explaining yoga styles — what's Hatha, what's Yin, what's Vinyasa
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add a section explaining yoga styles — what's Hatha, what's Yin, what's Vinyasa
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add a section explaining yoga styles — what's Hatha, what's Yin, what's Vinyasa
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add a section about our small-class policy — max 8 students, why it matters
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add a section about our small-class policy — max 8 students, why it matters
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the hero is intimidating for beginners — soften to 'first time? perfect.'
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add a 'private sessions' section — 1:1 with a teacher, $120/hr, by appointment
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add a 'meet the teachers' section with 3 placeholder bios in soft tone
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add a serene hero image of an empty mat in soft morning light, wooden floor
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emphasise 'first class free' across hero + sticky bar + footer + a dedicated section
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emphasise 'first class free' across hero + sticky bar + footer + a dedicated section
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the schedule should be a clean week-grid layout, not paragraphs
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the schedule should be a clean week-grid layout, not paragraphs
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the schedule should be a clean week-grid layout, not paragraphs
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the schedule should be a clean week-grid layout, not paragraphs
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the colour palette is too pink — warm earthy sage + dusty linen tones
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the colour palette is too pink — warm earthy sage + dusty linen tones
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the colour palette is too pink — warm earthy sage + dusty linen tones
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the colour palette is too pink — warm earthy sage + dusty linen tones
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the colour palette is too pink — warm earthy sage + dusty linen tones
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the headings feel commercial — use a soft humanist serif
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the headings feel commercial — use a soft humanist serif
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the headings feel commercial — use a soft humanist serif
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the headings feel commercial — use a soft humanist serif
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the headings feel commercial — use a soft humanist serif
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replace 'Sign up now' with 'Reserve your mat' — softer + invitational
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replace 'Sign up now' with 'Reserve your mat' — softer + invitational
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replace 'Sign up now' with 'Reserve your mat' — softer + invitational
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3-tier pricing clearly: drop-in $25, 10-pack $200 (best value), monthly unlimited $180
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3-tier pricing clearly: drop-in $25, 10-pack $200 (best value), monthly unlimited $180
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3-tier pricing clearly: drop-in $25, 10-pack $200 (best value), monthly unlimited $180
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