the about copy is too marketing-y — write like a friend telling you about a place they love

Base site
Category
Text rewrites
Tools called
4
Duration
51.7s
HTML diff
Changed
Example ID
LB-001

What changed: about

Before
Before — about
After
After — about
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Agent's response

I’ve rewritten the copy in the “About” section to sound more like a friend sharing a favorite place—swapping the marketing‑y tone for a relaxed, personal voice while keeping the structure and details intact. Drafts are ready for your review.

Tool calls

list_sections step 1
{
  "page": "index.html"
}
read_section step 2
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about"
}
text_replace step 3
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about",
  "old": "<p class=\"text-body leading-relaxed mb-6\">\n            Driftwood Lodge sits above the Wollombi River, where the water moves slowly and so do we. With just four rooms, we have kept things intimate — no crowds, no rush, no noise. Wake to birdsong, brew a coffee on your deck, and let the day unfold at its own pace.\n          </p>",
  "new": "<p class=\"text-body leading-relaxed mb-6\">\n            Driftwood Lodge sits right above the Wollombi River, where the water takes its time and so do we. There are just four rooms, so it feels qu
text_replace step 4
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about",
  "old": "<p class=\"text-body leading-relaxed mb-8\">\n            We believe a getaway should feel like coming home, only quieter. Every detail — from the continental breakfast waiting for you each morning to the pet-friendly policy that welcomes your whole family — is designed to help you exhale.\n          </p>",
  "new": "<p class=\"text-body leading-relaxed mb-8\">\n            We think a getaway should feel like coming home, only a bit quieter. Everything — from the continental breakfast waiting for you each morning to letting you bring yo