the about section is stiff — make it sound like one tradie introducing his crew

Base site
cap-plumber
Category
Text rewrites
Tools called
3
Duration
84.3s
HTML diff
Changed
Example ID
PB-003

What changed: about

Before
Before — about
After
After — about
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Agent's response

I’ve rewritten the copy in the **about** section to sound like a tradie introducing his crew—more conversational, Aussie‑flavoured, and focused on a personal promise (“I turn up, I work out what’s wrong, and I fix it so it stays fixed”). The heading, subheading, and icon blocks remain unchanged; only the paragraph text was updated. Drafts are ready for your review.

Tool calls

list_sections step 1 
{
  "page": "index.html"
}
read_section step 2 
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about"
}
update_section step 3 
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about",
  "html": "<section id=\"about\" class=\"py-20 sm:py-24 bg-canvas\">\n    <div class=\"max-w-6xl mx-auto px-5 sm:px-8\">\n      <div class=\"grid lg:grid-cols-2 gap-12 lg:gap-16 items-center\">\n        <div class=\"order-2 lg:order-1\">\n          <span class=\"text-accent text-xs font-semibold uppercase tracking-wider\">Our Approach</span>\n          <h2 class=\"font-display font-bold text-3xl sm:text-4xl text-primary mt-3 mb-6 leading-tight\">\n            Plumbing done right the first time\n          </h2>\n          <div class=\"space-y-4 te