the about section is third-person — switch to first-person plural for warmth

Base site
Category
Text rewrites
Tools called
5
Duration
56.7s
HTML diff
Changed
Example ID
ACC-003

What changed: about

Before
Before — about
After
After — about
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Full page · Before
Before (full page)
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After (full page)

Agent's response

Updated the ‘about’ section heading to “We’re built for the business owner who wears every hat” and revised the opening sentence to “We know you didn’t start your business to spend weekends buried in spreadsheets or decoding ATO correspondence.” The draft is ready for your review.

Tool calls

list_sections step 1
{
  "page": "index.html"
}
read_section step 2
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about"
}
text_replace step 3
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about",
  "old": "<h2 class=\"font-display text-3xl sm:text-4xl font-semibold text-primary leading-tight mb-6\">\n            Built for the business owner who wears <span class=\"italic\">every hat</span>\n          </h2>",
  "new": "<h2 class=\"font-display text-3xl sm:text-4xl font-semibold text-primary leading-tight mb-6\">\n            We're built for the business owner who wears <span class=\"italic\">every hat</span>\n          </h2>"
}
read_section step 4
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about"
}
text_replace step 5
{
  "page": "index.html",
  "section": "about",
  "old": "You did not start your business to spend weekends buried in spreadsheets or decoding ATO correspondence.",
  "new": "We know you didn't start your business to spend weekends buried in spreadsheets or decoding ATO correspondence."
}