Multi-step edits
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the whole site is too formal — soften everything while staying credible

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reframe the whole site around the prospect's pain ('tax stress, surprises, lack of time') — every section answers a worry

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shorten everything + add an opening hours block + change the CTA to a Maps link

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make the whole site feel like Sunday morning — slower pace, longer paragraphs, breakfast focus

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shift focus to mornings: hero copy, opening hours emphasis, surf-club mention, breakfast specials

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add an emergency dental section + a 24/7 phone CTA + mention same-day appointments in the hero

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shift emphasis to 'no judgement' messaging across hero + about + a dedicated section

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shift focus to solar + EV across hero + services + add testimonials

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emphasise river views everywhere — hero copy + rooms copy + add a 'views' section

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add 'check availability' CTAs in 4 places + dedicated booking section + pricing tier badges

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the site should scream 'we'll be there in an hour' — phone in hero, response-time guarantee, sticky phone button

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add suburbs covered + a 'check your suburb' interactive list + adjust hero to mention the area

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reframe the whole site around 'when it can't wait' — every section emphasises speed + 24/7 phone

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refresh whole site: warmer hero + dedicated investment section + soften every CTA + add 3 testimonials

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the wedding section needs love — rewrite copy + add 3 images + a 'investment from' line

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emphasise 'first class free' across hero + sticky bar + footer + a dedicated section